Add some backgrounds next time and that'd easily be another half star. Other than that just work on the quality of your drawing and you'll keep getting better.
Add some backgrounds next time and that'd easily be another half star. Other than that just work on the quality of your drawing and you'll keep getting better.
Thanks for the feedback
I was really interested in this at first. After I watched this I had to look at some of your other work because the art on this seemed to good to be a shitpost. The apple gave me a really uneasy feeling and I was waiting for something to happen to the orange juice. I was really disappointed there was no actual animation though.
Maybe go for more color and some sound next time.
Thank you for the great advice! Wait up for Episode 3.
Funny audio but could've used more animation and maybe a background.
Could've used more animation rather than a slideshow of still pictures. I thought the audio was funny though.
yeah i know im been trying to animate then just a slideshow but its my own style but thanks for the review tho
Love the stop motion!
The laughter was contagious
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Its alright but try to use some real animation next time. Looks like this was just you screen recording.
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